A Poem For My Private Parts
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(01-07-2011, 12:16 AM)cigarbabe Wrote:  I was going to say to Jack that,if he removes the my from these lines, "my fingers" and "my pubic hair", who's fingers and hair would he be talking about?
It wouldn't make any sense to me as a reader of the poem which, I adore!
Just my2 cents! [Image: http://serve.mysmiley.net/evilgrin/evilgrin0010.gif]
C.B.
That's sort of why I didn't want to remove the "my" before "fingers."
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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A Poem For My Private Parts - by heslopian - 12-31-2010, 11:00 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by billy - 01-01-2011, 04:18 PM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by heslopian - 01-01-2011, 05:25 PM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by billy - 01-01-2011, 05:38 PM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by cigarbabe - 01-02-2011, 03:55 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by heslopian - 01-02-2011, 10:53 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by Todd - 01-06-2011, 12:46 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by heslopian - 01-06-2011, 08:28 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by cigarbabe - 01-07-2011, 12:16 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by heslopian - 01-07-2011, 12:25 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by cigarbabe - 01-07-2011, 12:53 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by Todd - 01-07-2011, 02:12 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by billy - 01-07-2011, 10:34 AM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by heslopian - 01-07-2011, 12:26 PM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by Lawrence - 01-08-2011, 05:53 PM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by heslopian - 01-08-2011, 06:18 PM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by billy - 01-08-2011, 06:36 PM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by kath3 - 01-08-2011, 06:40 PM
RE: A Poem For My Private Parts - by heslopian - 01-08-2011, 06:47 PM



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