01-06-2011, 01:50 PM
Thank you for the feedback and really kind words, Billy
I'll make the appropriate edits in a mo. Would the second line work better if I put "mind" instead of "heart"? As for the "but," that's a pretentious flourish of mine, which I often add to sound more like William Shakespeare than Maya Angelou
I've been trying to cut back on that recently.
I'll make the appropriate edits in a mo. Would the second line work better if I put "mind" instead of "heart"? As for the "but," that's a pretentious flourish of mine, which I often add to sound more like William Shakespeare than Maya Angelou I've been trying to cut back on that recently.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe