01-03-2011, 06:16 PM
Just read through it, and I like it!
Althoufgh I'm drunk and cannot help you now "crisp breeze and head held high" seemed weak. More to come.
EDIT
I cannot add too much. Sprite-elf swagger and crisp breeze is just too much for me. Other than that, solid work.
Althoufgh I'm drunk and cannot help you now "crisp breeze and head held high" seemed weak. More to come.
EDIT
I cannot add too much. Sprite-elf swagger and crisp breeze is just too much for me. Other than that, solid work.