12-25-2010, 03:19 AM
Yes to everything you said. This poem, I confess, wasn't written with an elegant structure in mind. Back when I produced it several months ago I just made random line breaks. Thanks for your great feedback, Todd; I'll use all the suggestions you made once I've finished this.
The funny thing is, since writing this poem, I've come to really dislike ellipses, so thanks for pointing them out to me here.
Thanks also for your very kind words
The funny thing is, since writing this poem, I've come to really dislike ellipses, so thanks for pointing them out to me here.
Thanks also for your very kind words
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe