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Friction (Revision 2)
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12-22-2010, 01:26 PM
I read the original draft of this and thought it was great, but the revised version is even better. Somehow it seems more succinct. My favourite is the second verse; it has that simple, straightforward beauty which I love in literature.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Friction (Revision 2) - by Todd - 12-22-2010, 05:24 AM
RE: Friction - by billy - 12-22-2010, 12:50 PM
RE: Friction - by Todd - 12-22-2010, 01:19 PM
RE: Friction - by heslopian - 12-22-2010, 01:26 PM
RE: Friction - by billy - 12-22-2010, 01:36 PM
RE: Friction (Revision) - by Todd - 01-06-2011, 02:23 AM
RE: Friction (Revision) - by heslopian - 01-06-2011, 08:38 AM
RE: Friction (Revision) - by billy - 01-06-2011, 11:09 AM
RE: Friction (Revision) - by Todd - 01-07-2011, 02:19 AM
RE: Friction (Revision) - by billy - 01-07-2011, 10:23 AM
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