12-19-2010, 07:35 AM
lot's to like with this jack.
the palm tree metaphor,
the last 5 lines could be a short poem on there own, though they work well in this one.
they're my faves. i'd put a 's after desert but it's no biggy,
great to see you putting one in
thanks for the read.
the palm tree metaphor,
the last 5 lines could be a short poem on there own, though they work well in this one.
they're my faves. i'd put a 's after desert but it's no biggy,
great to see you putting one in
thanks for the read.