12-18-2010, 02:50 PM
i liked it all except for the last line.
it made struggle to get a handle on it.
i loved the 2nd couple but the 1st felt off. it read well but to see october and spring soil in the same couplet made me do a double take.
my final thought was that normally weed is grown indoors with heat lamps and nutrients. through a 12 week cycle.
it may be that i'm the only one who'll have these thought because drugs were a major part of my upbringing and background when i was younger.
outdoor plants are stringy and a lot less potent.
it made struggle to get a handle on it.
i loved the 2nd couple but the 1st felt off. it read well but to see october and spring soil in the same couplet made me do a double take.
my final thought was that normally weed is grown indoors with heat lamps and nutrients. through a 12 week cycle.
it may be that i'm the only one who'll have these thought because drugs were a major part of my upbringing and background when i was younger.
outdoor plants are stringy and a lot less potent.