12-15-2010, 11:35 AM
Hi Billy,
Thanks for the comments. I think some of the vagueness would be cleared up if the right diety is picked (it's not christ think more viking) but I get where you are coming from. The questions line I see what you mean. The ending, yeah Lawrence also keyed on that and I'm probably going to placeholder the one I pasted to him into a working revision. Thank you again--very helpful.
Best,
Todd
Thanks for the comments. I think some of the vagueness would be cleared up if the right diety is picked (it's not christ think more viking) but I get where you are coming from. The questions line I see what you mean. The ending, yeah Lawrence also keyed on that and I'm probably going to placeholder the one I pasted to him into a working revision. Thank you again--very helpful.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson