Muninn REV 11-25-12

Muninn REV 11-25-12

Lawrence
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12-15-2010, 02:26 AM

The last stanza greatly damaged what I believe to be your best poem on here. I was entranced until the end. "All dreams burn" "I am the answer to all these prayers" and "Stir the ashes" seem weak and semi-cliche.

I'll go more into detail in a bit.

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Muninn REV 11-25-12 - by Todd - 12-15-2010, 01:44 AM

RE: Munin - by Lawrence - 12-15-2010, 02:26 AM

RE: Munin - by Todd - 12-15-2010, 03:56 AM

RE: Munin - by billy - 12-15-2010, 10:04 AM

RE: Munin - by Todd - 12-15-2010, 11:35 AM

RE: Munin (Revision) - by Todd - 12-16-2010, 05:10 AM

RE: Munin (Revision) - by billy - 12-16-2010, 08:40 AM

RE: Munin (Revision) - by Todd - 12-16-2010, 11:53 PM

RE: Revision 11-25-12 Munin - by Todd - 11-26-2012, 12:57 PM

RE: Munin REV 11-25-12 - by billy - 11-27-2012, 11:25 AM

RE: Munin REV 11-25-12 - by Todd - 11-27-2012, 11:35 AM

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