Carol
#12
it works better for me.

with the went, i find it okay but if you wanted you could say was
christmas was never so slow
or
was christmas ever so slow.

or leave as is. i think all ways are pretty much of a oneness
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Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 05:33 AM
RE: Carol - by billy - 12-10-2010, 05:41 AM
RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 06:57 AM
RE: Carol - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 06:03 AM
RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 06:46 AM
RE: Carol - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 06:48 AM
RE: Carol - by billy - 12-10-2010, 08:48 AM
RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 01:18 PM
RE: Carol - by billy - 12-10-2010, 07:41 PM
RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-11-2010, 12:14 AM
RE: Carol - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 11:14 PM
RE: Carol - by billy - 12-12-2010, 09:37 AM



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