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12-11-2010, 12:14 AM

(12-10-2010, 07:41 PM)billy Wrote: it does for me jack.

i do love that last line hehe.

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(12-10-2010, 11:14 PM)Lawrence Wrote: "Christmas never went so slow."

Actually, the "went" sounds kind of iffy to me.
Probably just personal preference.

I wasn't sure of that word when I was writing the piece, but all my alternatives made the sentence too long.

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Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 05:33 AM

RE: Carol - by billy - 12-10-2010, 05:41 AM

RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 06:57 AM

RE: Carol - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 06:03 AM

RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 06:46 AM

RE: Carol - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 06:48 AM

RE: Carol - by billy - 12-10-2010, 08:48 AM

RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 01:18 PM

RE: Carol - by billy - 12-10-2010, 07:41 PM

RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-11-2010, 12:14 AM

RE: Carol - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 11:14 PM

RE: Carol - by billy - 12-12-2010, 09:37 AM

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