Carol

[heslopian]

it was just the one line break here;

Christmas never <--

went so slow. I bought a

I seem to remember doing that as a way, I think, of marking the passage of time. Because it takes slightly longer to read, I thought it would emphasise the slowness mentioned. Trust me, it made sense in my head at the time.
Do you think it would read better like this?:

Christmas never went so slow.

I bought a "festive" cheeseburger.
Now there are
crumbs on my fleece.