12-10-2010, 09:46 AM
i think it was clear that you were the dichotomy of father son within the poem.
and i got it from these two lines;
Burning in the language of his eyes
Which are mine, and he tells me
in effect you tell yourself.
maybe if you said 'within a polished shine' as opposed to
'behind a polished shine'?
and i got it from these two lines;
Burning in the language of his eyes
Which are mine, and he tells me
in effect you tell yourself.
maybe if you said 'within a polished shine' as opposed to
'behind a polished shine'?