12-10-2010, 09:25 AM
The poem was about how I hate my father and cannot escape him, because I am him.
The "polished shine" is me looking at him in the mirror. His blood is my blood, so I listen to his blood.
I totally didn't make it clear enough
So, I wanted to convey anger, to convey disapproval, both at my father, and at myself for being like him.
The "polished shine" is me looking at him in the mirror. His blood is my blood, so I listen to his blood.
I totally didn't make it clear enough

So, I wanted to convey anger, to convey disapproval, both at my father, and at myself for being like him.
