Carol

[heslopian]

i love the festive cheese burger verse.
if i had a nit it would be breaking the line after never, it could just be me but it made me stall.

the first verse i can relate to, i had small kids once hehe.

a nice take on xmas. thanks for the read as always

Thanks for the kind words and feedback Billy I jotted this in MacDonald's whilst eating my "festive" burger (which was a rip off I might add. Just meat with a barbecue sauce; what's so Christmassy about that?)
My grasp on the line breaks is rather shaky here; I didn't afford them much technique, if I'm honest, which is no doubt why you stumbled.

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Oh, see, in my mind I pictured a passable ride :p
I should've read a bit more into that.

I'm the one who wrote the piece, I should be doing the legwork haha