12-10-2010, 06:46 AM
(12-10-2010, 06:03 AM)Lawrence Wrote: "synthetic angels"The original line was "dancers in a music box," but I thought that was too cliche. I see what you mean; "synthetic angels" is very obscure. As for the faces being blank, that was simply my observation; those rides were deathly dull
For some reason, this doesn't work for me.
No rollercoasters, just depressingly slow merry-go-rounds. I should probably have specified that in the text.Thanks for the feedback, Lawrence
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