Carol

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12-10-2010, 05:41 AM

i love the festive cheese burger verse.
if i had a nit it would be breaking the line after never, it could just be me but it made me stall.

the first verse i can relate to, i had small kids once hehe.

a nice take on xmas. thanks for the read as always Smile

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Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 05:33 AM

RE: Carol - by billy - 12-10-2010, 05:41 AM

RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 06:57 AM

RE: Carol - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 06:03 AM

RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 06:46 AM

RE: Carol - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 06:48 AM

RE: Carol - by billy - 12-10-2010, 08:48 AM

RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-10-2010, 01:18 PM

RE: Carol - by billy - 12-10-2010, 07:41 PM

RE: Carol - by heslopian - 12-11-2010, 12:14 AM

RE: Carol - by Lawrence - 12-10-2010, 11:14 PM

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