Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends.
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My words do not strike
sparks against the flint

You share only what is new.
What is that to me? So like murder: a black flutter,

Great poem, but it's a form break, no?
I agree that this is a bastard to execute.

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Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 11-29-2010, 03:50 PM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-08-2010, 09:46 PM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-09-2010, 06:36 PM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-09-2010, 09:56 PM



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