Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends.
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(12-08-2010, 11:05 PM)Heslopian Wrote:  Settle down, the nursemaid’s here,
Eating a scone as she draws you a bath,
Happily spilling crumbs on the floor.

Round and round the grey mass swims,
Screeching like an injured cat,
The skull a shattered pine cradle.

Eternity: a schoolyard taunt
Tracing a line down your scalp,
Piercing the tight flesh

Happily, like your nursemaid as she
Eats her scone. But you invented her.
Rotund soother, she eases the pain.
i know you know i know todd knows you know you didn't start with j
yorra veree veree bad boy

nicely done i felt the torment.
the first stanza was really good.

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Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 11-29-2010, 03:50 PM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-08-2010, 09:46 PM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by billy - 12-09-2010, 09:16 AM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-09-2010, 06:36 PM
RE: Poetry Prompt 4: Beginnings and Ends. - by Lawrence - 12-09-2010, 09:56 PM



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