First Kiss (Revision)
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Hi All,

Billy: Thank you. I appreciate the feedback especially on edits for poems this old.

Addy: Thank you for the look. Again the feedback is very helpful to know you're moving in the right direction.

Digna Sofia: Thank you. I'm glad the flow worked for you. It's nice to make your acquaintance. Appreciate your comments.

Lawrence: Thank you. I'll give some thought to lines 8-9. Always appreciated.

I'm going to have to look at more of this "is any of the old stuff salvageable with a face life. I hadn't thought to go back into the old files.

Again thank you all,

Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Messages In This Thread
First Kiss (Revision) - by Todd - 12-01-2010, 07:51 AM
RE: First Kiss - by billy - 12-01-2010, 08:58 AM
RE: First Kiss - by Todd - 12-03-2010, 06:54 AM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by billy - 12-03-2010, 08:58 AM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by addy - 12-03-2010, 01:18 PM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by digna_sofia - 12-04-2010, 01:20 PM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by Lawrence - 12-06-2010, 02:50 PM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by Todd - 12-07-2010, 11:35 PM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by billy - 12-09-2010, 09:29 AM



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