12-06-2010, 12:44 PM
A minor spelling mistake in line 6, but overall for me it has impeccable pacing and structure. I guess if I had to nitpick the image of the gnarled weekend threw me as to the sense of the poem. Is it that you anticipate the weekend such that the anticipation no longer feels like joy but is torturous? I feel like I may be missing it.
Nevertheless, fine, fine work
Nevertheless, fine, fine work
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?