First Kiss (Revision)
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Great edit, you were able to pack it tight with palpable tension. Loved this.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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First Kiss (Revision) - by Todd - 12-01-2010, 07:51 AM
RE: First Kiss - by billy - 12-01-2010, 08:58 AM
RE: First Kiss - by Todd - 12-03-2010, 06:54 AM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by billy - 12-03-2010, 08:58 AM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by addy - 12-03-2010, 01:18 PM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by digna_sofia - 12-04-2010, 01:20 PM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by Lawrence - 12-06-2010, 02:50 PM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by Todd - 12-07-2010, 11:35 PM
RE: First Kiss (Revision) - by billy - 12-09-2010, 09:29 AM



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