12-03-2010, 05:25 AM
You did a good job with this Billy. It's a lot harder than it looks (I've had a few false starts).
Fingering a worn marble in my pant’s pocket.
That and the cold smoothness later the narrator trying to make himself hard in that moment was really what brought this one home for me.
Best,
Todd
Fingering a worn marble in my pant’s pocket.
That and the cold smoothness later the narrator trying to make himself hard in that moment was really what brought this one home for me.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson