12-01-2010, 12:27 AM
Thank you for the feedback and kind words Todd
Would re-arranging those couplets in that way hurt the poem's coherence? I love your idea about ending on the strongest line, but I'm not sure if that would make sense.
Would re-arranging those couplets in that way hurt the poem's coherence? I love your idea about ending on the strongest line, but I'm not sure if that would make sense.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe