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[billy]

The jungle sings
a million tones

a metaphor used to show that there is still some green canopy

shout a singular defiant shade Can you shout a shade? Again, this may just be my ignorance.

i think you can with a metaphore

In my opinion, punctuation in a poem should be all or nothing. One solitary mark looks shabby to me.

good point.

thanks for the feedback jack. i'll ponder your feedback when i do an edit.