First Dose
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the poem is a gem.
if i had a nit it would be

the pic, it's way too large and detracts from the poem more than it adds.
if they were the same size i think it would be lots better.

thanks for the read jack
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First Dose - by heslopian - 11-27-2010, 11:52 AM
RE: First Dose - by billy - 11-28-2010, 09:17 AM
RE: First Dose - by heslopian - 11-28-2010, 11:16 AM
RE: First Dose - by Todd - 11-28-2010, 11:02 AM
RE: First Dose - by addy - 11-28-2010, 11:15 AM
RE: First Dose - by billy - 11-28-2010, 12:48 PM
RE: First Dose - by heslopian - 11-28-2010, 11:01 PM



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