Superficial
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I think most of us have gotten caught in that situation during our love journeys ... it's sad and hurtful.
Good poem, and I agree, the last stanza is great.
I have a minor suggestion ... I would switch around "to catch and release" to read release and catch.
You give to the world when you're giving your best to somebody else.
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Superficial - by tidalnymph - 11-21-2010, 11:11 AM
RE: Superficial - by billy - 11-21-2010, 12:21 PM
RE: Superficial - by heslopian - 11-21-2010, 12:22 PM
RE: Superficial - by tidalnymph - 11-21-2010, 02:35 PM
RE: Superficial - by addy - 11-22-2010, 02:30 PM
RE: Superficial - by kath3 - 11-26-2010, 05:52 AM



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