Lillith Incarnate (content warning)

[Mrs-Sin]

So, reworked thanks to some awesome advice from Todd (I haven't completely followed your advice, but it was very helpful)! What do you think? Any better, or should I have left it alone? I also feel the need to explain my inspiration for this; it is indeed referring to Lillith, first wife of Adam, who refused to be dominated by him and fled Eden. My idea was simple: what if Lillith found herself in a Mental Asylum?

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The door whispers open, a serpent clad in darkness slithers out
Bleak eyes search the paradise of ‘home’; I make my way unerring;
It’s your turn for a visit tonight, so I come
To rack your body with chills and tremors of pleasure

I’ll leave you torn and broken…

I’m calmed for the day, observing panic with smug wild eyes
Police with sombre faces, taking notes, not understanding, comprehending
“Who could do something like this?” Remember where you are, my pets.
Who shall be my victim tonight?

I’ll leave you torn and broken
Gasping your last breath in rapture…

Bad night to patrol, my love, now see me
Hunt, watch my lithe form appear next to you
Just keep running, adrenaline makes you go down smoother
You’ll beg me not to stop in the end.

I’ll leave you torn and broken
Gasping your last breath in rapture
Restraints stained with blood and arousal…

Ageless eyes peer out and mark you down
Best to ignore my beckoning finger, ignore the sultry murmur
The cold in these hands is death itself
These kisses will suck your breath away
No-one hears your babbling, pet; remember where we are
So sweet, the innocence of insanity.

These hallways cannot own me
The cages cannot keep me
My lust cannot be sated
I’ll drain you dry tonight.

I’ll leave you torn and broken
Gasping your last breath in rapture
Restraints stained with blood and arousal
Want to play black cat and mouse?

The door whispers open…