11-22-2010, 11:09 PM
I like the way you jump-space, mainly because as I was reading, for the second time, I thought about the words going down my throat. If they had've been long sentences it would have been one hard word-drink to swallow. 
My favourite piece has to be the last because we all love a good twist. At first I was preparing myself for a very dark, witty poem but you brought it right down to the sick, obsessed, teenage first-kiss character I had in my head to a light, fun coffee-addict. How very cool of you! 
My favourite piece has to be the last because we all love a good twist. At first I was preparing myself for a very dark, witty poem but you brought it right down to the sick, obsessed, teenage first-kiss character I had in my head to a light, fun coffee-addict. How very cool of you!