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Superficial
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11-21-2010, 12:22 PM
This is lovely. Dark and operatic, tinged with romance. I think the last stanza should read "or did you just want" and "these torn/rugged pants," but other than that wonderful.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Superficial - by tidalnymph - 11-21-2010, 11:11 AM
RE: Superficial - by billy - 11-21-2010, 12:21 PM
RE: Superficial - by heslopian - 11-21-2010, 12:22 PM
RE: Superficial - by tidalnymph - 11-21-2010, 02:35 PM
RE: Superficial - by addy - 11-22-2010, 02:30 PM
RE: Superficial - by kath3 - 11-26-2010, 05:52 AM
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