Superficial
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(11-21-2010, 11:11 AM)tidalnymph Wrote:  You once
offered me
the sun,
the moon,
and the world
when all I
ever wanted
is just
you...

I can't help
but wonder,
do you even
want me
like how
I wanted you,

or you just [is there a 'did' missing?]
wanted the
milky way
hidden inside
this torn [these]
rugged pants,
to catch
and release
your
raging
shooting stars?
thanks for the read tidal, the last verse was my favourite

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Superficial - by tidalnymph - 11-21-2010, 11:11 AM
RE: Superficial - by billy - 11-21-2010, 12:21 PM
RE: Superficial - by heslopian - 11-21-2010, 12:22 PM
RE: Superficial - by tidalnymph - 11-21-2010, 02:35 PM
RE: Superficial - by addy - 11-22-2010, 02:30 PM
RE: Superficial - by kath3 - 11-26-2010, 05:52 AM



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