Flavored Kiss

[billy]

I let my fingers
chase you down
as you slither
effortlessly
from the tip
of my tongue
down to my throat [is there a need for 'to']
all the way [is this line needed?]
to my belly

I try not to
scream
as you wander
inside of me,
teasing my senses
making me
burn
at the same time
chill

great verse, wouldn't change a thing in it.

Strong
and dark
bitter-sweet
flavored kiss [if kiss goes on the above line would flavoured be needed?]
you got my
lipstick smeared
but my heart [would and work better than 'but]
is wildly tangled
to this hazy bliss

So I let you
linger further
my hands
are shaking
my heart
is beating fast
but i know [is 'but needed?]
this love affair
couldn't last

So I just inhale
where you lay
one last time
and lick what's
left of you
and smile...

" I cant believe,
I got lost again
to a cup of coffee!"

nice twist.

i want to give you my coffee

i like the twist at the end kass. a few small nits i posted in the body of the poem but nothing hard and fast.
all in all a delightful meander into the art of seduction by java.

thanks for the read