11-21-2010, 05:21 AM
i like this one jack
not sure if the last 2 lines add anything though it's about you
in comparison as the title states so it must stay.
feels like a semi rant. hehe. well worth a read
thanks jack.
one nit, tell us something about nathen, give us a qualifier, is he a fellow poet etc. we know of
bukowski and ginsberg so for them it isn't as important.
not sure if the last 2 lines add anything though it's about you
in comparison as the title states so it must stay.
feels like a semi rant. hehe. well worth a read
thanks jack.
one nit, tell us something about nathen, give us a qualifier, is he a fellow poet etc. we know of
bukowski and ginsberg so for them it isn't as important.