She's not perfect

[LiteraryAntiquity]

Thank you I personally thought I needed some help with this one, I'll correct the spelling and grammar errors and see if I can get it to flow better, thanks

I also wish to apologise on the front of critique. I am brutal and honest because it is what helps me and no doubt should be felt when I offer critique because it's just how I learn best. Billy does it to me and it offers me a great insight on my own work. Say the word and I'll be more tender, it's not a concern, your poem had all the theory and emotions in the right place I just am one for nit picking because it helps me. Well done for braving the serious critique section.

Literary Failure.