Spirit Girl.

[LiteraryAntiquity]

Really liked this. I especially like how I didn't get it immediately, but instead the story slowly unfolded. Very engrossing.

I'm glad you liked it Addy I thought it worked well with the photograph, I hope that was apparent. Thank you for your comment, I will be sure to read more of yours when I am fully awake as currently I am half asleep. Thanks again. LF.

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lots to like in this LF
some great lines and good images.

i love this verse which could be a short poem all of it's own'

When he sleeps I put submarines in his dreams,
It's not as sick as it seems.
He used to dream of knives and crime
but I put in happiness, everything survives.

and this one's the same:

I'll do anything I want to do,
I even changed her italic font.
I'll pretend there's nothing there,
it's just simple cold, cold air.

thanks for th eread

Thank you very much Billy, as always I adore your comments as they aid no end. I especially feel more accomplished knowing that there was no real critique with this one. Thanks again, respectfully, LF.