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Unbreakable
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11-19-2010, 11:45 AM
Again, I love where you went with this poem... a truly uplifting piece of work, with lots of great lines. The only part that tripped me up was the beginning, "If every forever..." , was it meant to be a question? But anyway that's just a very minor quibble. Thanks for sharing this!
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 10:47 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by billy - 11-19-2010, 11:07 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 11:11 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by billy - 11-19-2010, 11:13 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 11:16 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by addy - 11-19-2010, 11:45 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 11:48 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by kath3 - 11-22-2010, 01:41 PM
RE: Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-23-2010, 10:18 AM
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