11-19-2010, 11:07 AM
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some good couplets in the poem Michelle:
i find it refreshing that your poetry looks on the brighter side of life.
If every forever has a goodbye,
Every lie has some truth. i like this quote the most
and this is also one i really liked;
They made sense, and they still do.
Maybe nothing is breakable.
What if they're wrong?
What if nothing breaks, if just becomes one. [It is missing]
thanks for the read

