Unbreakable
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some good couplets in the poem Michelle:
i find it refreshing that your poetry looks on the brighter side of life.

If every forever has a goodbye,
Every lie has some truth.
i like this quote the most
and this is also one i really liked;
They made sense, and they still do.
Maybe nothing is breakable.



What if they're wrong?
What if nothing breaks, if just becomes one.
[It is missing]

thanks for the read Wink




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Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 10:47 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by billy - 11-19-2010, 11:07 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 11:11 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by billy - 11-19-2010, 11:13 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 11:16 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by addy - 11-19-2010, 11:45 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-19-2010, 11:48 AM
RE: Unbreakable - by kath3 - 11-22-2010, 01:41 PM
RE: Unbreakable - by xXxForbiddenLovexXx - 11-23-2010, 10:18 AM



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