Through The Cracks

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If you say it's all unfair,
And nothing is alright,
That your life is falling apart,
Too much happens to you.

The sky, its falling down.
Cracking, shattered, misplaced.
Did you ever look through those cracks?
Have you seen the light, the bright side?

Where everything is okay,
Perfect, unbreakable, like a heart.
So much love, and so beautiful.
Never can be broken, only stronger.

Your like something priceless, you once said.
Worthless, yet means the world.
You made me feel special,
Flawless, and adored.

I was loved, I will never let it pass my mind,
You loved me, I loved you.
I did anything for you,
My first love.

thanks for posting the first of what will be many poems FL

would Never can be broken read better as Can never be broken
would made in between only and stronger help the flow?

a nice transition from the first three verse to the last two. the sentiment within the poem is clear and flows well. maybe a good image or two would help make it shine.

thank you for the read FL

I love to write, so expect more. And thank you, I try to keep on one subject with each poem I will take into consideration your advice and edit it Thank you for your feedback!