Spirit Girl.

[billy]

lots to like in this LF
some great lines and good images.

i love this verse which could be a short poem all of it's own'

When he sleeps I put submarines in his dreams,
It's not as sick as it seems.
He used to dream of knives and crime
but I put in happiness, everything survives.

and this one's the same:

I'll do anything I want to do,
I even changed her italic font.
I'll pretend there's nothing there,
it's just simple cold, cold air.

thanks for th eread