11-17-2010, 01:37 AM
I'm thinking of swapping the 2nd and 3rd verse, with heavy revision.
Thanks Billy!
Thanks Billy!
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The Ocean's letter to the first lighthouse
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The Ocean's letter to the first lighthouse - by Lawrence - 11-16-2010, 04:31 PM
RE: The Ocean's letter to the first lighthouse - by billy - 11-16-2010, 07:19 PM
RE: The Ocean's letter to the first lighthouse - by Lawrence - 11-17-2010, 01:37 AM
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