11-16-2010, 03:08 AM
To be honest with you, I agree with Billy.
I loved this poem and its smooth language, its mystery and pull.
When I found out what it was, though, I lost much of this.
I only stumbled on one line:
"It is the horse?
Yes, it is the horse.
That is the horse!"
Otherwise, good work.
I loved this poem and its smooth language, its mystery and pull.
When I found out what it was, though, I lost much of this.
I only stumbled on one line:
"It is the horse?
Yes, it is the horse.
That is the horse!"
Otherwise, good work.