11-13-2010, 04:50 AM
excellent rhyme
about the game and about life, relationships etc.
if i had a nit it would be that the ending feels a
little forced or even unnecessary. for me the piece would be
better if it ended at mate. it has good flow and therefore reads well
thanks for the read lawrence.
about the game and about life, relationships etc.
if i had a nit it would be that the ending feels a
little forced or even unnecessary. for me the piece would be
better if it ended at mate. it has good flow and therefore reads well
thanks for the read lawrence.