11-13-2010, 02:33 AM
Professor might get pissed, so I'm going to give this a brief overview and then I'll return to it later tonight and give the full enchilada
Stanza one has amazing enjambment.
A regal view of the wall? If that's intentional, bravo.
The last line of stanza two seems clumsy to me
Soul doesn't work too well for me.
Good rapist comparison.
Love the last stanza.
Be back with a full review in a few..
Stanza one has amazing enjambment.
A regal view of the wall? If that's intentional, bravo.
The last line of stanza two seems clumsy to me
Soul doesn't work too well for me.
Good rapist comparison.
Love the last stanza.
Be back with a full review in a few..