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[billy]

a fine nonsense poem along the lines of;

I went to the pictures tomorrow
I took a front seat at the back
I fell from the pit to the gallery
And broke a front bone in my back
A lady she gave me some chocolate
I ate it and gave it her back
I phoned for a taxi and walked it
And thats why i never came back which i remember from my childhood.
not much to critique in a nonsense poem
unless it makes sense, thankfully the 5th verse does (for me)and therefore doesn't really fit the theme of the poem

While he’s lurking within every bubble
He’s floating in deep outer space
Inside the one “o” in “trouble”
And every word you erase
the above was my fave verse and;

Inside the one “o” in “trouble”
my fave line

thanks for a good write lawrence.