Extended Metaphors
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i'll post an effort later Wink
i have started writing.
"All the world's a stage and men and women merely players. " is one of the most famous extended mets. though you want one that runs through the whole poem, don't you, you callous person? Angry

so here it is after about 50 minutes Blush

i'm okay with critique so don't worry about giving it.
the nature of the beast.

When break time blew its golden horn,
the kids migrated south.
Waterfalls of shiny leathered feet
would gallop from the boma walls;
A rage of screaming wildebeest that jostled,
ran, and rampaged,
splashing walls with paw marks
and scuffing floor with hooves.
They’d spill across the tarmac plains,
to buck and bully with the rut
Calves would meekly wander;
be forgotten in the crush.
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Extended Metaphors - by Lawrence - 11-10-2010, 05:11 AM
RE: Extended Metaphors - by heslopian - 11-10-2010, 05:43 AM
RE: Extended Metaphors - by billy - 11-10-2010, 05:47 AM



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