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Talking until the room fills
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11-09-2010, 09:49 PM
Lawrence, you're a solid writer. There are good lines in more areas than the last stanza. If you choose to make the eskimo stanza sit in a different poem okay, but scrapping all the lines would be a shame (obviously your call though).
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Talking until the room fills - by Lawrence - 11-08-2010, 11:46 AM
RE: Talking until the room fills - by billy - 11-08-2010, 06:12 PM
RE: Talking until the room fills - by heslopian - 11-08-2010, 08:21 PM
RE: Talking until the room fills - by Todd - 11-09-2010, 12:29 AM
RE: Talking until the room fills - by Lawrence - 11-09-2010, 06:38 AM
RE: Talking until the room fills - by heslopian - 11-09-2010, 06:53 AM
RE: Talking until the room fills - by Todd - 11-09-2010, 09:49 PM
RE: Talking until the room fills - by billy - 11-11-2010, 11:29 AM
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