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Inhale/Exhale
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11-06-2010, 08:57 AM
Excellent poem. Some minor typos but quite forgivable. Great opening lines, vivid and with a great dynamism to it... the rest of your images carry on just as strongly. Like the mirroring effect in some of the images, with the tension/resolution dynamic. Thanks for posting this
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Inhale/Exhale - by Lawrence - 11-05-2010, 09:36 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by billy - 11-05-2010, 12:04 PM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Todd - 11-05-2010, 12:10 PM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Todd - 11-05-2010, 11:26 PM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by heslopian - 11-06-2010, 02:33 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Todd - 11-06-2010, 03:45 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Lawrence - 11-06-2010, 04:08 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by billy - 11-06-2010, 07:08 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by addy - 11-06-2010, 08:57 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Lawrence - 11-08-2010, 12:50 PM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by billy - 11-08-2010, 01:43 PM
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