Inhale/Exhale
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Awesome review guys! This gets me so much closer to a final copy, and I'm grateful that you took the time to create such a concise, thorough analysis. Thanks for getting the mimicking (I thought that wasn't a half bad idea at the time Tongue)

I have loved poetry for awhile now, and have wrote for awhile too, yet I couldn't find a website that didn't reek of a circle-jerky "Omahgosh I love your poems! Read mine please?" sort of thing.

But yeah, killer to be here. Thanks again.
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Inhale/Exhale - by Lawrence - 11-05-2010, 09:36 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by billy - 11-05-2010, 12:04 PM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Todd - 11-05-2010, 12:10 PM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Todd - 11-05-2010, 11:26 PM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by heslopian - 11-06-2010, 02:33 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Todd - 11-06-2010, 03:45 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Lawrence - 11-06-2010, 04:08 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by billy - 11-06-2010, 07:08 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by addy - 11-06-2010, 08:57 AM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by Lawrence - 11-08-2010, 12:50 PM
RE: Inhale/Exhale - by billy - 11-08-2010, 01:43 PM



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