On Receiving My First Student Loan Payment
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(11-05-2010, 08:23 AM)billy Wrote:  
(11-05-2010, 08:23 AM)Heslopian Wrote:  4. Think It Over. An
itinerary forms now that money
is received.
should that be;
And
itinerary forms

or;
An
itinerary form
The sentence looks correct to me. I thought "itinerary" was, or at least could be used, as a singular noun?

(11-05-2010, 08:23 AM)billy Wrote:  i'd have said lennon instead of john lennon but i think i'm being a bit pedantic.
I think I only put John Lennon's full name because I wanted the three syllables, thus mirroring "Kitchener." I can be very illogical at times, as I'm sure you know by nowHysterical

Thanks as always for your kind and thoughtful feedback, BillySmile
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RE: On Receiving My First Student Loan Payment - by heslopian - 11-05-2010, 06:40 PM



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