11-05-2010, 12:10 PM
Hi Lawrence,
This is really great work. I'm going to spend some time with the poem tomorrow and hope to have some more specific comments for you. There are many stand out lines here. It was a real pleasure to read.
I'll be back and try to give you comments through the lines.
Best,
Todd
(Welcome to the forum. I look forward to reading more of your work).
This is really great work. I'm going to spend some time with the poem tomorrow and hope to have some more specific comments for you. There are many stand out lines here. It was a real pleasure to read.
I'll be back and try to give you comments through the lines.
Best,
Todd
(Welcome to the forum. I look forward to reading more of your work).
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson